I was going to wait until I had finished and posted all the panels for page 2 before I posted a composite, but I couldn't wait.
Ideally I would like to be drawing all these on the same page, perhaps on a nice big 18x24 piece of bristol vellum. But unfortunately I neither have a printer that could handle that size of paper, nor a budget for lots of fancy illustration board.
So in the meantime, I have to be content with having a separate 8.5x11 page per panel, and with not getting to see the way my pages are flowing (outside of my crude preliminary thumbnails) until I stick them all together.
Not getting to see the story flow is the biggest draw-back to drawing panels individually. This is the first time I'm seeing these side by side, and it's feeling more than a little disjointed to me. It also looks pretty busy, which I wasn't able to see because I was completely focused on one panel at a time.
hmm...got to come up with some kind of solution...